We are surrounding by advertising. Some people think that this is good, because it gives us a choice as consumers. But others argue that it makes people selfish and greedy for more and more goods. Do you think that there should be less advertising?
Advertising is undoubtedly necessary in today free market as the competitiveness among producers becomes more and more severe than ever before. Some people would argue that advertisements have good impacts on consumers while other hold the argument that they leave negative influences as it cause selfishness and greediness among buyers. In my view, the drawbacks of advertising outweigh the advantages and the exposure to advertisements should be controlled.
It is inevitable that advertisements are beneficial for consumers. In detail, ads can provide basic information about the products, which...
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- IELTS Task 1 95
Sentence: Some people would argue that advertisements have good impacts on consumers while other hold the argument that they leave negative influences as it cause selfishness and greediness among buyers.
Description: The fragment it cause selfishness is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace cause with verb, past tense
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1791 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.477 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.158 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.093 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.493 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5