Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently; you should
Write about
a) Explain the content of letter
b) why you need translated report
c) why do you need it urgently.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to request you concerning translating my letter that I am compelled to send to a big company in the San Francisco that work in nutrition industry. Actually, my letter’s content is a job requesting for a human resources vocation. Another documents that should be translated to English language is including identification card, my high school evidence and educational certificates. From social perspective, this opportunity can be a decisive factor in one’s success. It is interesting to note that, in the first step I serve as an apprentice that I think I can completely benefit from this opportunity. Furthermore, I would very appreciate if you consider my ultimate deadline for sending these documents is 23 of August and I just have one week to collect these documents.
I would be most grateful if you would submit the translated report as soon as possible to the address listed in the envelope.
Yours Faithfully
Mansoureh Sheikh
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- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 89
- In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- You are living in a city in a foreign country and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days Write an email to your friend asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making ar 82
- Some people think that the government should give money to creative people, such as artists and musicians. To what extent do you agree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to request you concerning t...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...content is a job requesting for a human resources vocation. Another documents that should...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23532745638 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0943326234 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186024469832 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685972989039 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650903465422 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165234728489 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226630458521 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.