tpo do you agree or disagree that children should work the same their parents jobs.
in It is critical important for the youngsters to choose the career that are like to do. In this sensethat will create more creative productive generation, which can give a lot of benefits for their community and for themslves. In my opinion, is good for young people to adopt the same work of their parents. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the children who are interested in same their parents' jobs, would be more experienced than those are doing jobs for the first time. which thing give them a lot of undestanding, so they can accomplish their dreams. Children who are lived between parents are creative in some job, they can add all the knowledge and the formation are gained to their children. My own experience is a compelling example of this. after graduation from high school, It was difficult to me to decide which major should I have to study. Then I decided to study medicine just like my father. I spent a lot of my free time and all my vacation working at his clinic, since I was freshman until my graduation. As a result, I gained a lot of information ane experience, which thing has a huge impact on my success at this career. I have never been successful as what I am now, If I would not have one of my parents is expert in this job.
Secondly, working at the same field of the parents field can help to know a lot of acquaintances, which thing more important than the degree itself nowadays. Friends and high successfull people in some fields can reduce the long distance for peoplewho have to reach their goals. For example, my cusin Susin, she working at very big bank firm, the same firm that her mother was work at. Her mother friends help Susin to get this position direct away after her graduation. I heard her always says, her mother's friends are more important than her degree. If my cusin Susin had not chosen same her more major, she would not get a job like she what have now.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that good for young people to work same their parents jobs. This is because the working same on of their parents' job, could help to gain a lot of experience from them. and because adopting same father or mother jobs can help them to get fast and good position at any firm or company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45714285714 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42372415417 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4446475234 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208774506521 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705036874204 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787261707064 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143363898334 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553106777013 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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