Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to a job application which I've applied through online portal namely indeed.com. I've enrolled myself in all the job portals available online. Luckily, my resume got selected for one of the dream position such as Software Development in Continuous Integration Process in a Multinational Company situated in Australia. Fortunately, the company is looking out for Engineers holding a Master Degree in Data Science.
As you are aware of the fact, My current economical situation is deteriorating. Moreover, it is unfair to depend on my parents to fulfill my extra ultimatum, Such as, they pay EMI for my educational loan. In that situation, you may sense that this opportunity is going to help me to fix the circumstances financially and mentally.
The company has one mandatory demand to carry a reference letter from the head of the department of the respective university, detailing about the student's accomplishment , behavior, skills, extracurricular activities and ability to perform the tasks in a boiling pressure. Would you mind sharing, a brief note about my performance in those parameters listed above.
I look forward to receiving a positive response in this matter and urge you to assist me in achieving my dream job.
Many Thanks,
Shahin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...in reference to a job application which Ive applied through online portal namely in...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...hrough online portal namely indeed.com. Ive enrolled myself in all the job portals ...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...s you are aware of the fact, My current economical situation is deteriorating. Moreover, i...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...pective university, detailing about the students accomplishment , behavior, skills, extr...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ailing about the students accomplishment , behavior, skills, extracurricular activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28229665072 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15709617146 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674641148325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6517331717 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148133802537 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508289613699 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325694866241 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850487768713 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236266138159 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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