The graphs below show the seasonal data of two Brazilian cities over the year.
The given diagrams are illustrating seasonal data of two Brazilian cities namely, Brasilia and Recife throughout the year.
It can be seen that, the highest amount of rain fall in the Brasilia city is 250 mm in December. In this city, after the month of June the amount of rain fall is increase gradually and after December it reduce constantly and plunge with around 10 mm in June. However, in Recife city, increasing rain fall from 50 mm in January to 250 mm in May then after, it fall down gradually and reached around 30 mm in November, but in December, it slightly increase again.
The highest temperature of the Brasilia city is around 30 degree celcious in August , while Recife city is 3 degree celcious more hotter in February. The coldest temperature of the Brasilia city has 0 c., where as Recife city has 15 c. The maximum average hours of sunshine in Brasilia city and Recife city has 9 hours in July and November respectively. At the same time, 16 numbers of day are thunder in Brasilia city, only 3 days, meanwhile, are thunder in Recife city.
Overall, Brasilia city has more rainy and coldest weather as compare to Recife city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...ncrease gradually and after December it reduce constantly and plunge with around 10 mm...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
...January to 250 mm in May then after, it fall down gradually and reached around 30 mm...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... November, but in December, it slightly increase again. The highest temperature of ...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y is around 30 degree celcious in August , while Recife city is 3 degree celcious ...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'hotter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: hotter
... while Recife city is 3 degree celcious more hotter in February. The coldest temperature of...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...perature of the Brasilia city has 0 c., where as Recife city has 15 c. The maximum avera...
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Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as 0 c., where as Recife city has 15 c. The maximum average hours of sunshine in Br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70935960591 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52151449946 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5952165801 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142291012809 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818123281907 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106259536539 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131959026013 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135735808873 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.