Investment of advertisement has never failed to cause heated debates among company, and sports world. There exists a conflicting views about whether the company should invest money for advertisement in sport games.
On one hand, some peple argue that it would be beneficial for company to invest money in ads. This is because that it would be helpful to improve the popularity of both the company and sport games. As we all know, if a company decide to make an advertisement in sport games, they should afford some money to the host of this games. Hence, the money would be one of the pivotal profts for sports games, which would develop serval services in that and accelerate the progress of sports field construction.
On the other hand, other people paranoid that investing advertising money for sports games would be backfired. As the advertisment's interference from companies, sportsmen would have to pay too much time in performing for ads rather than calm down and practise their sports techniques or improve their physical level. It would be obvious that sportsmen could not achieve a good score in the future since that happened.
All in all, albeit there would be truely more disadvantages if the company invest money in advertisemnt, i suppose that the company should make advertisements for sports games properly. It is a good opportunity for the company to make a propoganda of their products or their organization culture so that improve the reputation among the whole society. Moreover, it would be also beneficial for sports games, because it would be lucrative for sports game if they allow the advertisement and they would be able to provide better sports equipments and better services for sportsmen before the sport games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'view'?
Suggestion: view
...ports world. There exists a conflicting views about whether the company should invest...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...should afford some money to the host of this games. Hence, the money would be one of...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e company invest money in advertisemnt, i suppose that the company should make ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, i suppose, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75976800555 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486111111111 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4561657583 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377853315937 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175052962811 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754038208986 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268230904862 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215054462215 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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