The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The author's proposal to increase the budget for advertising, in order to improve the success of super screen-produced movies, is filled with gaps and holes. The author, though logical in his reasoning, fails to cite concrete evidence to prove his claims.
To begin with, the author states that a recent report from the marketing department showed that, during the past year, fewer people have attended super screen-produced movies than in any other year. The author fails to provide the scope and validity of this report. For example, the marketing department might have falsely portrayed the lower number to increase the budget of the advertising team, which comes under the marketing team. moreover, there is no information provided regarding the survey conducted to obtain these results. hence, it would be incorrect for the author to base his claim on this certain report. Furthermore, the report states that "fewer" people attended the super screen movies last year. it might be possible that the movie industry, as a whole, could have been affected by online streaming services over the past year, and hence, led to fewer viewers for all movies. To strengthen his position, the author should have provided exact figures for the decrease in people, since the term fewer people could mean 10 people or 1000 people too.
Additionally, the author claims that the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers increased over the past year. The author, once again, fails to mention the exact increase in percentage. hence, the percentage increase in positive reviews could be 1% or even 50% for that matter. We can cannot make any assumptions regarding this figure, and therefore, this evidence cited by the author cannot be taken into consideration. moreover, the reviews are given by movie reviewers, who are professionals and view the movie with a different persperctive and thus, these reviews only depict their views towards the movie, and does not portray the opinion of the general public. thus, to prove his stance, the author should have considered the reviews provided by the general public along with the movie reviewers.
Building upon the above implications, the author concludes that the problem lies with the public's lack of awareness regarding good quality movies, and not with the quality of super screen movies. As shown previously, the author's claims are baseless since he does not substantiate it with reliable sources of evidence. thus, super screen could allocate their advertising budget for other reasons, but, it would not be wise to form their decision based on the author's arguments.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 422 350
No. of Characters: 2135 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.532 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.059 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.515 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.52 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.408 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
The authors proposal to increase the budget for adv...
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Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
..., which comes under the marketing team. moreover, there is no information provided regar...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...rvey conducted to obtain these results. hence, it would be incorrect for the author t...
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Line 7, column 727, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nded the super screen movies last year. it might be possible that the movie indust...
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Line 13, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...ntion the exact increase in percentage. hence, the percentage increase in positive re...
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Line 13, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...hor cannot be taken into consideration. moreover, the reviews are given by movie reviewe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 484, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e reviews are given by movie reviewers, who are professionals and view the movie with a...
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Line 13, column 662, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...and does not portray the opinion of the general public. thus, to prove his stance, the author ...
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Line 13, column 678, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...tray the opinion of the general public. thus, to prove his stance, the author should...
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Line 13, column 767, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... considered the reviews provided by the general public along with the movie reviewers. ...
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Line 19, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...e it with reliable sources of evidence. thus, super screen could allocate their adve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29146919431 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65951109394 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497630331754 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 705.55239521 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.76447105788 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0397368414 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.526315789 119.503703932 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235503586703 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754650998764 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108627656293 0.0701772020484 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132515529628 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982266493342 0.0628817314937 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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