Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer: items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
In most accession handmade items are highly respected than machine made one. This is maybe the reason why handmade items are expensive. However, it is specially made for individuals desire and imagination, personally, I prefer machine made stuffs including clothes and furniture for some reason.
First of all, I would like to highlight my idea in case of manufacturing clothes. Handmade clothes are fancy, it is especially made for individual. But, clothes is clothes, whether it is made by machine or human, it is made to cover our naked body. For example, in cold winter day, warm sweeter made by hand and machine will both warm us and let us felt comfortable. Hence, I would say that machine made clothes are better because it cheaper and it accomplishes its role.
Secondly, furniture is my next example to support my idea that machine is better. Somehow, machine have a better ability to cut, arranging and painting in exact geometrical shapes. For the consequences, machine made furniture will become perfect shaped and glass like textured painting. About handmade, to make exact measurement it will require experiences and knowledge. For instance, to create complicated creature with different angles and shapes, the producing duration will be way to different in hand and machine.
Last but not least, for the manufacturer, machine made will definitely require less time, intelligent and failure. Once the machine is installed in exact setting, it will produce hundreds and thousands of product in less time with perfect result. Comparing to this example, handmade producer product will be different in some way, there product will never be exact same with each other.
In conclusion, whenever I have got asked by choosing handmade or machine made, it would definitely choose machine made for the reason mentioned above. It is cheaper, perfect and constant than handmade.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to machine'
Suggestion: to machine
...achine made, it would definitely choose machine made for the reason mentioned above. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24422442244 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74884407218 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6680798905 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2777777778 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314586406914 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102098362199 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758034717716 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187568096206 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925222372607 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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