Shopping has become a new favorite pastime for young generation. Why is this the case? Should you encourage them to develop other hobbies too?
Shopping has increasingly become the new leisure activity for the Millenials. Fascination to wear new and trendy clothing and increasing spending capability of individuals has made shopping a favourite pastime. In my opinion, youth should be encouraged to develop other interests in different areas which can help them become responsible person toward society and themselves.
Fashion trends are constantly changing and younger people are the ones who are the most influenced by this change. This is because they are well informed about the new style statements in the market through various platforms, mainly by the internet, following many fashion websites. Moreover, people nowadays have plenty of easy payment facilities by debit and credit cards, easy EMI options which allow them a bigger window to pay their expenses rather than paying at once. For example, if someone wishes to buy a new Apple iPhone which cost a fortune for an ordinary man, with premium EMI options making payment in instalments does not seem big of a deal to people. For these reasons, the younger generation is more inclined to purchasing a variety of products to pass their free time.
However, they should develop hobbies that are beneficial to them in the future. Learning a new trade such as stitching, which is losing its popularity with easier availability of readymade clothing, can help then revive and reuse their older clothes with new styles. Thus, they will be cutting down on their waste product that is generated by unnecessary shopping. In addition, in order to keep health in check physical activities should be promoted in daily routine, by taking up any game as a hobby.
In conclusion, while shopping has become seemingly popular in the younger generation, it is definitely not very productive. So, I believe, youth should get more involved in creative activities that can result in making them a better individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23225806452 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72894265086 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641935483871 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6710385158 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239914703406 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797557884365 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649070190265 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142870891212 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624300879657 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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