You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:Explain why you are selling the television.Describe the television.Suggest a date when your friend can come and see i

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You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter:

Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

Dear Sasha,

I’m writing to let you know that I’m interested in selling my television.

Last month, I’ve applied for the integration program in digital processing under the international scholarship program. I’m thrilled to share that my profile got accepted and I’ve to leave in a couple of weeks because the commencement of the new session is on 31st of this month. University prospectus says that I’m not allowed to keep a TV in my dormitory so I thought it is better to sell it.

I remember when I first bought this Sony Vaio television, you were pretty impressed with the configuration. Infinity 38” inch led display, two USB 2.0 ports, and stereophonic surround sound. I must tell you this version still is one of the best sellers.
I was wondering if you’re still interested in buying this television. I’d make you a fairly reasonable offer. This weekend I’m at home, packing all my belongings. Why don’t you come and give it a glance once again? Let me know if you can’t make it.

I’ll wait for your reply.

Best regards,
Ansh.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...ospectus says that I'm not allowed to keep a TV in my dormitory so I thought it is...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for your reply. Best regards, Ansh.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15934065934 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94356305496 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686813186813 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5475910857 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0714285714 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186878671045 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767019468344 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669838197444 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127613307508 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618977706022 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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