Dear Mr. Jogani
I recently move to new house A-16 which next to your place.we are three members in my my family my son,my wife and I. I am working in software company, my wife is housewife and my son is studying. I am waiting this letter to you to invite in party which I will be planning to organize on Sunday evening.
I have just brought my own house after overcome financial problems. I decided to give party to my relatives and friends for my new house. Party will start at 7:00pm with light drinks followed by general meeting of each other afterthat we will finish our dinner till 9:00pm. Then, we will play some games and dance on various songs like traditional garba , DJ, Bollywood songs etcetera. However, I am afraid that the noise from it will distract you but you do not worry I will try to avoid much noise by using soundproof curtains hence I wood like to apologize in advance for any inconvenience.
We will be happy and appreciate your presence if you will be there. It will good chance to be familiar and know each other because we are now neighbours.
I hope you accept my invitation and join us on party.
With regards
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51184834123 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43624655132 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8125695371 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157946351148 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555246982492 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054849181995 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1001182202 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228452788506 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.