The graph illustrates the population of visitors in million who visited six art galleries in 2011.The Louver museum in Paris had the largest number of visitors which is just under 9 million. In contrast, the State Hermitage in Russia had the minority of users which is a hair less than 3 million. 6 million visitors went to Metropolitan Museum in USA which is twice the number of those visited Museo del Prado in Spain. The total number of people who went to National museum of Korea is slightly above 3 million. This number is just under 6 million for British Museum of UK.
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Suggestion: a million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 472.0 965.302439024 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 196.424390244 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58252427184 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47521410997 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 58.0 106.607317073 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 146.7 283.868780488 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9278464403 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214591054363 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110989165595 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115431772823 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214591054363 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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