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recent years, food has received considerable concern among Western communities due to the believe that unhealthy and leads to the poor quality of Western people diets. Therefore, it is true that in many countries such as UK and US have a high risk of obesity with contain lots of meats, sugar and fat. As such replacing their fast food by eating vegetables to make some changes in their diet.
Initially, the reason of this is obesity have a significant impact on am individual’s life. Espesially, particularly of Western people who are still exist consuming junk food. If the popularity of fastfood had been increasing dramatically, these categories revealed that majority of people from the former are becoming more busier day after day. For example, The Western pattern diet (WPD) is a modern dietary pattern that is generally characterized by high intakes of red meat, processed meat, pre-packaged foods, butter, fried foods, high-fat dairy products, refined grains, corn (and high-fructose corn syrup) and high-sugar. The eating patterns habbit of many sugar are are measured by too high in calories. As result, more than two-thirds of all adults and nearly one-third of all children and youth in the United States are either overweight or obese. The high percentage of the population that is overweight or obese suggests that many in the United States overconsume calories.
How to tackle this problem? Making changes to eating patterns can be overwhelming. That’s why it’s important to emphasize that every food choice is an opportunity to move toward a healthy eating pattern. For instance, Small shifts in food choices can make a big difference for our body. Changing eat fastfood to consume vegetable and fruits have a lot of fibre and are full of nutrition like essential minerals and vitamins that may help your body improve metabolism and subsequently burn belly fat. Including these in your diet may help you not just in your weight loss journey, but also to live a long and healthy life.
In conclusion, Belly fat is not only just an eyesore and severely impacts our self-image as well as our confidence, but also it is harmful for health. However, there are some healthy foods that have natural belly fat burning abilities and consuming these foods can help you melt away that fat from your abdomen and achieve your goals naturally.
- In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion about this? 73
- Some people claim that what people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. critics say that these countries should change their died. what your opinion? 84
- In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion about this? 67
- In some cities government have few controls on deigns of houses and office. Owners should have freedom to choose designs. Do its advantages outweigh disadvantages . 11
- In some cities government have few controls on deigns of houses and office. Owners should have freedom to choose designs. Do its advantages outweigh disadvantages . 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oncern among Western communities due to the believe that unhealthy and leads to the poor qu...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...rn among Western communities due to the believe that unhealthy and leads to the poor qu...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h contain lots of meats, sugar and fat. As such replacing their fast food by eatin...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...cularly of Western people who are still exist consuming junk food. If the popularity ...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
... of people from the former are becoming more busier day after day. For example, The Western...
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Line 4, column 661, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sugar seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much sugar', 'a good deal of sugar'.
Suggestion: much sugar; a good deal of sugar
...gh-sugar. The eating patterns habbit of many sugar are are measured by too high in calorie...
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Line 4, column 672, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...he eating patterns habbit of many sugar are are measured by too high in calories. As re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08717948718 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76747332648 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582051282051 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9553084553 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455250560348 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0145895613901 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246327214696 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324540767863 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013584758315 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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