School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is not only what we gain from schools but also getting knowledge from life's dawn to the desk. Some people are of the opinion that the best available form elevation is achieved from live classes one gets from primary educational sectors to universities as compared to online classes. Up to a certain level, I agree with the statement as teachers have greater influence as they impart knowledge from the heart although internet the biggest source information of this hour.
As the axiom goes '''mother, father, teacher and God'', the ancestors of any civilised society believed the importance teachers after parents as they are well experienced guide me each and every learner. To put it in another way, unlikely to other resources, what a student learns from the mouth of a teacher has greater influence in the life of a learner in the long run as it is delivered with love and affection. It has the power to improve the personality and lifestyle of disciple where other resources fail. So it is considered the actual form of education by fulfilling the sole purpose of living.
On the contrary to this, to fight in the world of survival of fittest, people are inclined to depend on online resources to learn multiples of what they get from schools. There are an ample number of online delivered lecturers, websites and online libraries which help a passionate learner or reader to equip to stand with the fast-growing world. Hence, the internet has facilitated the limitless world of knowledge which is enough to meet the thirst of knowledge seeker.
To conclude, I consider learning from the presence of a teacher has greater influence in the life of learners as it the base of knowledge it is far better. However, to grip with the modern world depends on the web-world of knowledge is the urgent need of this hour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86900958466 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64990119428 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6922421507 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23114280308 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837079209275 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718294827539 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137701880533 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542369128811 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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