A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Jimmy,
I’m so grateful to you for showing your readiness to look after my house and Rocky while I’ll be in UK. I’m writing to guide you a little bit about various things to be taken care.
Firstly, you can contact me on the Email address written below. Secondly, you can also send me text message on my UK number if internet would out of access during my trips to hills.
Although Rocky is well-trained and mannered dog, you may face difficulty in giving him shower on alternate days. He is used to take shower after one day otherwise becomes furious. Also, you can find his food packet in the first cabinet of the kitchen. He does breakfast around 7 am.
Besides Rocky, you’ll have to check my mail box everyday since it gets filled with newsletters and advertisements. If you find any mail other than these, place it on kitchen shelf. Please water other plants once a week whereas twice a week to the plant placed in kitchen window.
Undoubtedly, you’re life savior, I’m so thankful to you for covering me during my absence.
Love.
Jonny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... in UK. I'm writing to guide you a little bit about various things to be taken care. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 120, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to taking'.
Suggestion: used to taking
...ing him shower on alternate days. He is used to take shower after one day otherwise becomes ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 54, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
..., you'll have to check my mail box everyday since it gets filled with newsletters a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88829787234 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51560881036 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707446808511 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0752955857 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1949673084 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656440735722 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561959196024 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10460776873 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650145330783 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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