You are travelling and you need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking your neighbor or a friend for help.
WHERE you are going.
WHAT the favor is.
WHY you need this friend to help.
Dear Judy,
Hope this letter finds you well! I wish you don’t mind me asking for your help with my cat while I’m out of the country.
As you know I have made my reservation recently to spend my annual leave in my home country, Egypt, for a whole month starting from next week. It’s been two years since I travelled there, and I guess you may feel how excited I’m to enjoy my vacation to the max.
The only thing that bothers me is leaving my cat, Whiskers, because I had no enough time to finish his travelling arrangements. So it would be great if you could make regular visits to my apartment and feed him. I will also need you to clean his litter box every other day and to brush him; you know he is so obsessive when it comes to his precious fur!
Since he knows you and he can easily recognize your smell, it won’t be a problem for you to approach him as he already trusts you. Besides you are the nearest one to my accommodation as I live here all by myself.
Thanks a million!
Love’
Randa
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| 2019-10-04 | hany mohamed | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... approach him as he already trusts you. Besides you are the nearest one to my accommoda...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanks a million! Love' Randa
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, well, while, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38659793814 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39155815954 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701030927835 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7840503039 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339007080614 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135872204942 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106523384177 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233848431912 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742118591837 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.