Nowadays battery operated vehicles are substituting the vehicles operated using natural gas (gasoline). I agree to this new age change as it turns out the battery operated cars are environment friendly and they are also cost effective in many ways.
The electric cars are very popular in use as they are eco-friendly and are not posing a lot of strain on the nature. Electric cars avoids the combustion of gasoline releasing tremendous amount of harmful chemicals causing air pollution. Also, the requirement of transporting these natural gases to the gas stations just adds on to the air pollution by burning more fuel to help reach the destination for people's availability. In a recent survey by environmental studies department at University of Texas, it was observed that the amount of fuel burnt to transport gasoline from its reservoir to the gas station was adding up hugely to the air pollution as the usage by the people in their cars.
Another benefit of the electric cars is that they are extremely pocket friendly. The electronically operated cars run on lithium ion batteries which are re-chargeable at home or the mechanic center and the electricity required in order to refill these batteries can be produced using the wind mills, water mills or solar panels. This demand for electricity facilitates the growth of more power plants station and in turn becomes economic for the people. Moreover, the electric cars are low maintenance as compared to the fuels operated ones and hence require less mechanic visits saving money. A leading newspaper's polls on the recent demand of electric cars suggested that a fuel run car requires on an average of five visits in a year to the mechanic for the maintenance whereas a battery operated might require just two visits annually.
To reiterate, the prohibition of fuel operated cars over the electric cars is going to be of great benefit. The first reason being that they are environment safe and secondly, in the near future they are going to prove to be highly economical.
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- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.Do you agree or disagree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02654867257 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78311979262 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533923303835 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6334960081 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.076923077 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199305920091 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083974904216 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593658367526 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123052267256 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492922163703 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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