QS 2 There is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass, cans). What are the reasons for this problem and what are some possible solutions?
Because our population is increasing the demand for products like paper, glass and cans is also rising.In our world today, all the waste materials we produce like paper, glass and cans are not recycled and a lot of them are wasted. This essay will discuss the reasons why recycling is in such low demand which are the absence of recycling factories and poor awareness among the public and suggest solutions to combat this issue like investment in recycling stations in developing countries and providing awareness to people regarding this issue.
Due to the climbing population, there is rising demand for paper, glasses and cans. But unfortunately a lot of these waste materials are not reused since only a few recycling stations are present in many countries of the world. The reason why this is because they are expensive to construct and to maintain.Running a recycling station requires costly machinery, skilled workforce and continuous electricity which many third world countries lack. For example, in Afghanistan there is no money reserved for recycling stations in the budget. Another problem is lack of awareness among the population. Most people do not possess the knowledge that recycling is important for the environment hence they do not recycle.
This difficulty can be solved by raising awareness about this issue and if first world countries start investing money in these projects in developing countries as they have an ample amount of money to help out those countries who lack funds for these type of projects. They can help them by investing money and providing training for their workers. For example, China has recently invested a lot of money in Pakistan for these recycling plants to be constructed in Lahore and Karachi. Furthermore, the public should also be made aware of the importance of these plants to the environment and to themselves. This can be achieved by educating the public through advertisements in newspapers,television and on social media.
In summary, although recycling of cans, papers and glass is important, many countries around the world do not possess recycling plants. This essay discussed the possible reasons why this is the case which included an expensive cost and lack of awareness among the people and gave solutions to this issue which included increasing investment on recycling and promoting awareness about this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, third, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25848563969 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88412846486 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45953002611 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9933907697 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.266666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288303586631 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102826227735 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546875482764 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201788306489 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595298273931 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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