Demand of food
Whether limited agricultural land can catch the rasing food consumption or not, becoming a topic of grave concern. This essay deal with the reasons of emerging food consumption and possible steps to tackle this problem.
What are the causes of increasing food demand?Firstly, the rapid population growth is main cause of incline in food consumption. According to the senses of 2011, world population is 6.9 billion, which is growing at about 3 percentage rate and going to cross the mark of 9 billion by 2030. Secondly, eating habits of societies are changing. Societies are adapting the consumerism culture, that leads to a food wastage. As an illustration, recently a report was published by WHO, in which organisation mention that near about 1/3 of world,s produced food was wasted.
However, With the increasing food demand, food processing technology is also emerging. Food processing sector focus on raising the crop production and fertility of agricultural land. Moreover, every year scientist are also developed and introduce hybrid crops and plants to face climate changes and better production rates. Apart from that, countries are join hands to tackle this problem. Developed nations are sharing their knowledge and technology with developing countries to raise crop production and low the crop waste. Furthermore, governments are launching an awareness campaigns and introducing new law to cut the food wastage.
In conclusion, I am saying that the cut down the food wastage is necessary as to increasing the food production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39256198347 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96573618991 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5618309367 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395653791136 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132418866049 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144986676342 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22863102692 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494300147503 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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