The number of older people is increasing in many parts of the world. What are the effects of this on society as a whole? What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
Old people play a significant role in terms of experience, culture, tradition and so on, which are very imperative for someone to be successful. However, some concede that proportion of old people is augmenting at a rapid pace, which may result various aftermaths on the society. Thus, I am going to put forth the effects and the associated results of it.
To begin with, old people act as a bridge to connect today's world with the past, but there may be certain problems, which may arise due to growth in the number of old people on account of plethora reasons. Firstly, more number of older people signify decline in mortality rate and higher consumption of resources, which in turn ultimately constitutes the disbalance in the resources, which in not favorable for any nation's growth. On the top of that, young people who are of full of energy and creativity may face the predicament of getting job opportunities, because of the indulgence of older people in such jobs, and hence it can amount to a source of disappointment for them. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that countries like India, which has around 65 percent of the population under 35 years of age, if such youth power will be utilized in an optimum way, then the country can prosper in a dramatic way.
On the other hand, former view of statement carries both sides, positive and negative sides. Firstly, there are certain professions, where experience determines success such as teaching, researching and so on, consequently there old people can set a paradigm. However, augmentation in older people can result huge burden not only for any nation, but for people as well, as they occupy places in some form or other, correspondingly not fruitful. In addition, people sometimes confront problems in looking after them, as old people remain physically vulnerable and need personal attention of family members, which can be an another ramification.
To conclude, I reckon old people are true asset for any nation and society, and people can learn myriad things from old people, which they can never learn from books. Here, advantages mostly outweigh disadvantages.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99431818182 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73165929191 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0764222735 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.230769231 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113127887154 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433582249457 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228877688939 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698353569165 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213459090704 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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