The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The tabular chart and bar graph depict about the reason for travelling in abroad by UK people in a survey made in Western Europe, North America and Other areas respectively, from 1994 to 1998.
Overall, the reasons were holiday, business, visits to friends and relatives, other reasons wherein holiday was dominant while other reasons were least.
It is explicit from tabular chart, holiday accounted 15246 in 1994 with gradual increment until 1998 where it was 20700. Furthermore, Business covered almost similar number for UK people who was ranging from 3155 to 3957 over the years. Moreover, Visit to friends and relatives occupied highest in the year 1998 where it was 3181 followed by 2628 in 1995 where it was lower as compare to other years. However, other reasons were significant in 1996 and 1997 with 1030, 1054 respectively.
It is evident from graph, western Europe was the most preferred destination which was around 25000 as compared to North America and other areas which were under 5000 thus, lowest among all.
As data indicates, there is a trend of gradual surge in both table and graph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...owed by 2628 in 1995 where it was lower as compare to other years. However, other ...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
...d destination which was around 25000 as compared to North America and other areas which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04324324324 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37515752428 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2363613817 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894027452557 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420782059312 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545803483618 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531517507421 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616841706123 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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