The pie chart illustrates the proportion of four online trading sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
It is clear that there was an increase in the number of online trading for sector such as films, music and books whereas, a drop in the proportion of travel and clothes sector. In addition, the highest and lowest sectors had modified over 10 years period. First, the incident of online shopping for film/music, books, had jumped from 21%, 12%, in 2003 to 33%, 22% in 2013. In contrast, 17% had decreased in the number of trading online for travel sector, and 8% fell in the incident of clothes sector. Second, an adjustment in the lowest and highest online shopping sector over a decade in New Zealand. From 2003 to 2013, the lowest and highest sector had changed from 19% of books to 16% of clothes with the lowest sector, and from 36% of travel to 33% of film and music with the highest one.
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. 67
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.Do you agree or disagree? 67
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, whereas, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53987730061 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26023460485 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478527607362 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0783295809 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334824078652 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188647493109 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122198542664 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351817007713 0.15604864568 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984511369428 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.