You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule.

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to inform you that, I want to take a Linux course and this course will help me a lot to do for developing the Internet of Things products for Home Automation System.

I will explain in brief, As you know I promoted as an Embedded Application Engineer in last week. To make new products and for the purpose of design verification knowledge on Linux device drivers is necessary. So, I am very enthusiastic to learn Linux Device Drivers which will be give more boost up to new era designs.

I am taking this course in Texas Instrumentations company, I hope I will get the brief information about Linux Drivers and the course will be starting on 15th October 2019 and class timings are Morning 8:30 to 11 A.M. Saturday and Sundays are closed. As you know, Our company timings are Morning 9:30 to 6:00 P.M. So, Can you Adjust my work timings from 11 to 7 P.M.

I am very grateful, If you are an adjust my work timings and I hope, I will get a positive reply from you.

Yours sincerely,
Bhanu

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very enthusiastic to learn Linux Device Drivers which will be give more boost up...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2019 and class timings are Morning 8:30 to 11 A.M. Saturday and Sundays are clos...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou know, Our company timings are Morning 9:30 to 6:00 P.M. So, Can you Adjust my ...
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Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Adjust my work timings from 11 to 7 P.M. I am very grateful, If you are an adjust...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...P.M. I am very grateful, If you are an adjust my work timings and I hope, I will get ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, in brief, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49214659686 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56414113675 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9762751682 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260817527781 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108387501963 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722835556962 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147344978485 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602144082619 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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