Many sports player advertise sports related products .what are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend.
In this contemporary world, advertisement plays a crucial role in order to effect the consumers buying decision.Nowadays, many sports persons endorse products of various companies.Although, there are certain merits of advertisement done by these atheletes.I would agrue that there are myraid of demerits.
To commence with, it is irrefutable fact that there are host of advantages of this phenomenon such as boosting the company's product sale and earning handsome money from advertisements.sports celebrities have huge fan following, which is beneficial for the various brands.To clarify this, when the products are endorsed by sport atheletes, individuals want to follow these celebrities, and they demand for that particular good.To cite an example, sachin tendulkar, reowned cricketer of india, endorsed a energy drink boost, due to this, many of his admirers also started to consume boost, resulting in burgeoning of sales of boost drink.Moreover, companies pay a enormous amount of money as a fee to the sports personalities, with the recourse of this, they earns millions of rupees.For an evidence, viral kohli, famous indian cricket player, earns upto 20 to 25 lakh per month, just by advertising products.
On the flip side, there are numerous grave disadvantages of promoting products through sports athelets.First and the foremost, when the sports celebrities join plethora of advertising compaign, there concenration is affected, and they cannot exert full potential towards the game.For an instance, milkha singh, a russian runner, lose a competition just due to his focus is turned towards the advertisement.Furthermore, players generally become money-minded by these practices of endorsement.As atheletes prediliction for money increases, they shift their interest from the game to wealth.For example, tennis player, hussanmalik, left tennis as he earned truckloads of wealth from advertisement, and now he can live a exotic life without playing tennis.
Hammering the last nail, although there are few benefits of advertising such as boosting sales and earning money, drawbacks associated with this issue is more serious and grim.Therefore, it is up to players whether or not to do advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73795180723 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54440651382 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 284.169403701 49.4020404114 575% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 476.25 106.682146367 446% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 20.7667163134 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.75 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249722453654 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147458117477 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472954477726 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147458117477 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472954477726 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 13.0946893788 360% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.23 50.2224549098 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.2 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.08 8.58950901804 152% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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