Many sports player advertise sports related products .what are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend.
In this commercialism era , numerous sports personalities has promote to sports equipment .This newest change provide strengthen to sale of sport items and it has a wonderful impact on youth .Both the views related to above given statement will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my perspective.
To begin with , commercial ads of games relevant products like sports shoes , cricket bat , badminton racquet generate sports game playing enthusiasm under masses. To illustrate, today's generation is more interested in sports and accept it professionally . Another pros is , sale of gaming products escalated consequently people are approach to purchase these goods not only for play games but also for maintain sporty look.
On the flip side , advertising sports celebrities get huge chunk of money for that work . sometimes , for money they promote those products which are not of better quality results people badly effect with it. Secondly , increases demand of sports things leads price goes up .youth enroll by commercial and waste their money on buying it. To exemplify , youngsters not prefers to bought cricket bat from domestic market they approach specifically for advertised bat , whether it's under budget or not.
To recapitulate , promoting gaming items beneficial for the growth of sports market and for games but it has also some drawbacks example high price and players greed for money . But overall results of advertisement profitable and it's merits outweigh to it's demerits.
- The government should educate children about their health right from school by introducing subject like health . Do you agree with this ? 73
- Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access and exchange of information . Far from being beneficial this is a danger to our society . What is your view ? 73
- Some people think that zoo's are cruel and all coo should be closed . While others believe that zoo's are useful for protecting rare species . Discuss both views and give your opinion . 89
- Many sports player advertise sports related products .what are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend. 56
- Should Government spend more money in improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation ? why ? Give reasons for your answers. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this commercialism era , numerous sports personalities has promo...
^^
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
...era , numerous sports personalities has promote to sports equipment .This newest change...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...ous sports personalities has promote to sports equipment .This newest change provide s...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nalities has promote to sports equipment .This newest change provide strengthen to...
^^
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...lities has promote to sports equipment .This newest change provide strengthen to sal...
^^^^
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s and it has a wonderful impact on youth .Both the views related to above given st...
^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Both
...and it has a wonderful impact on youth .Both the views related to above given statem...
^^^^
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... with my perspective. To begin with , commercial ads of games relevant produc...
^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ames relevant products like sports shoes , cricket bat , badminton racquet generat...
^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...products like sports shoes , cricket bat , badminton racquet generate sports game ...
^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d in sports and accept it professionally . Another pros is , sale of gaming produc...
^^
Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...accept it professionally . Another pros is , sale of gaming products escalated con...
^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cept it professionally . Another pros is , sale of gaming products escalated conse...
^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...calated consequently people are approach to purchase these goods not only for pla...
^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ntain sporty look. On the flip side , advertising sports celebrities get huge...
^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es get huge chunk of money for that work . sometimes , for money they promote thos...
^^
Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...get huge chunk of money for that work . sometimes , for money they promote those products...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...chunk of money for that work . sometimes , for money they promote those products w...
^^
Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ts people badly effect with it. Secondly , increases demand of sports things leads...
^^
Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and of sports things leads price goes up .youth enroll by commercial and waste the...
^^
Line 9, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e their money on buying it. To exemplify , youngsters not prefers to bought cricke...
^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...approach specifically for advertised bat , whether its under budget or not. T...
^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nder budget or not. To recapitulate , promoting gaming items beneficial for t...
^^
Line 13, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e high price and players greed for money . But overall results of advertisement pr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47413793103 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85420280636 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663793103448 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4759302492 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239283301369 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916604460307 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653922902793 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149254176176 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054920876021 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.