First of all, different kinds of art are at the peak of development at the moment and people also more interested in arts rather than sports. However, athletes usually get forgotten and only noticed only during some Olympic games, even if they brought a victory and fame to country they are from. Because there are not many fans of flourishing, but unknown types of sport such mas wrestling, they do not get supported. This is why government should pay more attention to sports in general , to let it advance further and represent the country on plethora of competitions.
Secondly, athletes daily go on their trainings, make an effort to become better with each day. On the games they represent the country and get first places; however, they usually train in old halls with old equipment. After bringing gold to home they do not get any reward and support. How after this acts they can continue what they do. Nobody can maintain progressing without support. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. In my country a lot of young males professionally fight. My brother is one of them. He used to do it for ten years, but then he dropped. Every day he went on trainings, truly loved what he did, won a lot of competitions, but conditions in the hall he was training in were not the best. Despite all the wins, nobody supported him, so tired of hard work and lack of reward he ended everything.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that high power should pay more attention and provide financial support to athletes. This is because they work a lot and truly deserve it, also they often get forgotten, even after succeeding multiple times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... pay more attention to sports in general , to let it advance further and represent...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t get any reward and support. How after this acts they can continue what they do. No...
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Line 2, column 776, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e all the wins, nobody supported him, so tired of hard work and lack of reward he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70689655172 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60605289149 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3917899687 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2941176471 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151450820974 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494908994395 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414156163716 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997242510406 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013787609921 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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