The pie charts illustrate the percentage of eight different sectors contribute to the Turkey’s economy between 2000 and 2016.
It is clear from the given information that in 2000, the proportion of agriculture precisely 24%. By 2016, it had decreased to 10%. In addition, the figure of healthcare and education accounted for 17% in both years. What is more, the percentage of leisure and hospitality decreased slightly from 17% in 2000 to 14% in 2016. Meanwhile, the data of trade, utilities and transportation sector was measured almost less than a quarter in both years.
Turning to the remaining details, the government contribution was 12% in 2000, but after sixteen years contribution was decreased 3%. Furthermore, the proportion of construction was exact 3% in 2000, whereas it increased almost threefold in 2016. Moreover, the figure of finance, business and other sectors was followed by 5% in 2000 and 8% in 2016 respectively.
Overall, maximum contribution to turkey economy made by agriculture, healthcare and education sector, whereas the least contribution was of construction, finance, business and other sectors in both years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, whereas, while, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46368715084 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1876489899 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6872215812 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244268868226 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103785070097 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101191162223 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188585723323 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114507469819 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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