“Globalization” refers to the growing economic and cultural interconnectedness between different regions of the world. Because modern transportation and electronic communication have made commercial relationships between distant people easier than ever before, the world is rapidly becoming a single interactive zone. This phenomenon has brought several unanticipated benefits.
The most commonly cited virtue of globalization is that it allows developing nations to use their low costs of living to their advantage. Because workers in developing nations can survive on less money, the production of goods in the developing world is significantly cheaper. This encourages business with those economies, fostering economic wellbeing. Southeast Asia, for example, has seen annual economic growth, allowing its citizens to live more comfortably today than their parents did only a generation ago.
A secondary but no less noteworthy advantage is that world trade creates competition that would otherwise be missing. As the rise of capitalism has demonstrated, competition forces the producers of goods to keep their goods’ quality as high as or higher than that of their competitors and, simultaneously, their costs as affordable as possible. This means, in general, better goods for lower prices among those countries that participate in the global system. Those that do not, meanwhile, see prices climb.
Finally, globalization has cultivated a mutual reliance between countries that puts pressure on governments to make safer and healthier choices. Countries that rely on one another’s business are far less likely to go to war, for instance, and also must listen to the environmental concerns of their business partners. Countries that pollute excessively will see less business, and therefore must learn to curb environmental damage.
The passage and the lecture are about Globalization. The passage appreciates Globalization and talks about its advantages. On the contrary, the lecture talks about the disadvantages of Globalization.
First, the passage says Globalization is good as it supports low living costs in developing nations. Moreover, the passage says the Globalization is helpful for cheaper production and henceforth, cheaper cost of products. However, the lecture criticizes Globalization as countries prefer to trade with other countries with cheaper labor costs like in SouthEast Asia for cheaper production costs instead of producing goods in their own country, which causes unemployment in the country.
Secondly, the passage talks about mutual reliance between the countries and appreciates the fact the countries would less likely to involve in conflicts and war-like situations for keeping good trade relations with other countries. On the other hand, the lecture berates Globalization for the danger of reliance as it happened during 2008 recessions when the effect was not only seen in the USA but also in most parts of Europe and other parts of the world.
Finally, the passage talks about the positive effects of Globalization on the environment as countries will try to keep the product quality high and take precautionary measures to prevent pollution whereas the lecture says that cheaper production will trigger more environmental problems and promote pollutions like air pollution which are harmful to the environment.
Therefore, it can be easily said that the passage favors Globalization and mentions its advantages like cheaper production costs, mutual reliance and environment-friendly measures. However, the lecture is against Globalization even after its several benefits and criticizes Globalization briefing its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.01324503311 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83394833948 5.08290768461 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22892356043 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509225092251 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.276537225 49.2860985944 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.727272727 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06452816374 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0119511016783 0.272083759551 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00465390344116 0.0996497079465 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0105063699136 0.0662205650399 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00694661248469 0.162205337803 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138932249694 0.0443174109184 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.3589403974 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.8541721854 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.2367328918 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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