Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
television has been a great invention in last few decades. it is considered as a mass communication medium. it not only keeps us updated with worldwide news but also serve as a medium of entertainment. Any invention has both pros and cons and here it is television
On one side it serves us a great cause, a way of getting updated with news, sports, a way of entertainment while it also has its disadvantages. one of the disadvantages of television is people specially the kids and adults get obsessed and over involved with it. This addiction of television works as an obstruction in relationships because people start spending most of their time in front of television. they get so involved with it that they forget their life after it, they stop going out, hanging out with friends and family members.
Moreover, when two persons in a family have to watch two different types of programs, there is often an altercation and heated argument between them which again causes communication gap between them.
In conclusion, in spite of several advantages of television, wonderful invention and great way of mass communication, I would agree with the statement that television has been a hinderence in relations. the addiction to television doesn't allow people to have healthy relationships with their friends and other closed & loved ones. I would consider it as a misutilization of a resource by human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05531914894 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10247049672 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8618098664 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138498889025 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527899903172 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316650693446 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796128764611 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397444222866 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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