Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer
Having good neighbors and a general good neighborhood is very important. That is because they are the people who live near us and have impact on our lives in a very direct way. Although some people may think that it is not important who your neighbor is or that their attutudes do not matter, others believe that it is important to have good neighbors. I personally believe that it is important to have good neighbors and I am going to explain their qualities based on my experience.
First, good neighbors don’t make loud noises and keep it quiet. It is imporatnt to have peace and quiet at you own house, and to be away from stress. However, this can not be achieved if your neighbor is loud all the time. If they fight or argue loudly frequently, or their daily routines and activities such as walking and etc. above your apartment makes noise, it makes it difficult to relax or focus at home. For example, I have a very noisy and loud family as my neighbor. They live right upstairs. I have only met them once or twice occasionally during my years of residency in that apartment, but I hear them every day because they are arguing and fighting all the time. And when they are not, they find other ways to disrupt me. For example they turn the volume of the TV up, enough that I can easily hear it. Also they vaccum pretty often and pretty loud. It appears that they have no mattresses or anything that can reduce the noise, so when they are vaccuming the house, I feel like the ceiling tiles are going to fall off. As you can see, their loud actions is really hurtful.
Second, a good neighbor does not intrude in other peoples lives. A good neighbor should be friendly and nice and helpful. But this does not mean that they shuld put their nose in other people’s lives and intrude in their peronal matters. It is important to feel safe and undisturbed at home without any body eavesdropping or checking you out. Good neighbors should help when they are being asked for their help for a precise matter. For instance, I used to live in an apartment some years ago, where my neighbor was an old woman and she lived alone. And because she was lonely, she used to come over and talk to me a lot and offer me help around the house and keep me company. I liked her very much and I appreciated her gesture, but some times it became really annoying since she asked me a lot about my personal life. It made me anxious and uncomfortable and I really did not wan’t to talk to a sranger about my personal matters. So, it is important to have a civil and helpful neighbor, but not in a way that intrudes into ones life.
In conclusion, I believe it is important to have good neighbors for they are the people living near us and affect the quality of our lives whether we like it or not. A goo neighbor should not make any distress to others by creating a lot of unnecessary noise and disrupting other’s daily actions. They should also be helpful and nice people, but that doesn’t mean that they can intrude in other’s lives and personal life. I think people should assess themselves as neighbors, in order to see if they are causing harm to their neighbors lives with their actions or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...el safe and undisturbed at home without any body eavesdropping or checking you out. Good...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 43.0 13.8261648746 311% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 100.0 43.0788530466 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2641.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49149659864 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44457275462 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447278911565 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 826.2 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.865799853 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1935483871 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9677419355 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93548387097 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247454498573 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753397741445 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747271670844 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183086336736 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787237520553 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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