Young people are committing more illegal acts than before and various parts of the world is suffering from this largely. There are several reasons to this. However, Influence from cinemas is one of the main reason behind this. Further, lack of proper education is another causes for growing youth crime rates. But, this problem could easily be overcome by creating awareness program at school as well as at the outside of the movie theater.
Motivation from movie theater exhilarate young children to do the acts done by their favorite actor/actress in the movie. Celebrity have different role to play in the society and their acts as well as performance from their cinemas tend to affect greatly in the lives of people , particularly among the young children. They do those activities as like in movies because they think that this would make them just like their favorite stars in real life too. Besides, they learn different ways of committing crime through movies and such type of serials. Crime petrol, a popular Indian series, for instance was made to make aware to the societies about the possible crime , however ended up leading youth learning various ways of doing immoral and illegal acts. In addition to this, Juvenile crime activities like; bullying at the school and streets, breaking of the sign board at the public places, egging of the cars, breaking windows, etc is due to the lack of proper education at the school. Yet, at some parts of the world , school education system is imparted in a way children are more focused towards theoretical knowledge thereby causing more youth crime rates than before.
However, these problems could easily be overcome through awareness program not only at the school or public places but also at the outside of the cinema hall. At the school, awareness program about the consequences of doing crime aware them not to do those acts. Growing children are always at the learning phase and they learn through movies, advertisements and also from the activities prevailing in our society. Children under at the age of 18 should be banned from watching violent movies so as not to influence them . Further more, cinemas theater should create awareness program to inform public youth about the information that the present movie show intends to impart to their viewers. Along with these keeping short notes at the street and public places about not to do immoral acts might aid to keep public youth aware and informed about the possible crime. Through Programs like; community-oriented service learning, adventure camps and treks and other outdoor activities helps youth be alert about various types of growing predominant immoral acts in our towns.
To sum up,various towns suffering from booming youth evil has several causes. But, one of the main reasons is due to encouragement from cinemas. School children with the absence of proper knowledge is also found to perform such misconduct. Awareness program can aid a lot in reducing such crime and thus, should be conduct not only at school but also at the outside of movie theater and other public places. Furthermore, I believe that, youth should be taught to be self-disciplined at the school that could create less crime when they mature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 41.998997996 236% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2710.0 1615.20841683 168% => OK
No of words: 537.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04655493482 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51314820755 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465549348231 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9174167975 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120270328765 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471494549734 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461935416214 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981665855358 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528971698269 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.