Nowadays many people choose to self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be a case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In this modern society, a majority of employees decide to work for themselves rather than applying for a company. In this essay, I will give some reasons why people tend to do that and several drawbacks of this trend.
There are a number of occasions lead to the self-employed decision of workers. It is obvious that technology’s development plays an important role in this trend. For example, working at home is easier these days because of the strong connection of the internet, as well as smart devices. Therefore, freelancers can work anytime and anywhere, which gives them more freedom to do what they like besides earning money.
In spite of these views, individuals might deal with several problems due to working on their own. Firstly, many workers could increase the work efficiency if they are not distracted by their colleagues, however, the lack of communication could lead to mental health problems. Another problem is that running a business is quite challenging if people are inexperienced and also a shortage of money. But the thing is if they succeed in their career, they might become a billionaire. If the business is running out of their control, they would learn a lesson for themselves. That is the reason why people try to catch a chance, even though they have a lot of issues to deal with.
In conclusion, I believe that people tend to do the business by themselves, however, there are still some disadvantages people might face with. Employees could balance their life between earning for a living and avoiding negative effects of being self-employed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04924242424 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87024000094 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6241475717 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272277678281 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787098506511 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576904145564 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159443744341 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603965088734 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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