The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The provided flow-chart describes about the stages involved in the life cycle of the silk worm, and in the next set of diagram, we can witness distinct processes of silk cloth production.
Overall, in the life cycle of silkworm we can see that there are four different stages from birth to adulthood. Next, when it comes to manufacturing of silk cloth there are five steps required to complete in order to get silk cloth as a finish good.
In the stage 1, mother moth lays eggs on a mulberry leaf. After 10 days in stage 2 these eggs hatch to larva and consume mulberry leaves for nutrition. 4-6 weeks later in stage 3 these larva starts producing silk tread around themselves, after 3-8 days larva enters into step 4 where larva completely covers himself inside the cocoon. Later it is evolved into an adult moth after 16 days, this moth repeats same cycle by laying eggs again.
In the production of silk cloth, first, the selected cocoons are boiled in water. In the next process, this cocoons are unwind into a long tread (length of 300m - 900m). And these long treads are twisted together for either dyeing directly or woven into silk cloth, later this cloth is also subjected to dye
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
.... In the next process, this cocoons are unwind into a long tread length of 300m - 900m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.663507109 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26485838005 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7730303019 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315443705271 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121275549282 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919462839829 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206571956288 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936790425837 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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