Your successfully passed a job interview. You are now expected to start on November 15 , but you will no tbe available on that date.
Write a letter to your boss....
--- Explain the situation
--expressing the your concern
--- Suggesting a solution
Respected Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you regarding my unavailability to join our firm on 2 August 2019 as depicted in my appointment letter.
The condition is such that my maternal uncle has visited my home for a small stay to visit a Cancer specialist in my city, as he is suffering from lung cancer, which is n the last stage and i have to be with him. Moreover, my parents are currently out of station for business purpose, leaving me alone and even my brother is so small to take care of my house.
Furthemore, I would be thankful that i have received the letter from your firm as I would definitely never miss an opportunity to work in your organization. In addition, the interviewers were so kindly that they understood my capabilities to work in a higly trained atmosphere you have in the company.
However, i would prefer to provide few suggestions. Firstly, you might provide me another date in the coming month of September or even after that. Secondly provide me the opportunity to attend interview in the coming year with priority in selection.
I would be thankful for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Praveen Solanki.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-10-12 | chetan Patthar | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Respected Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter...
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...in our firm on 2 August 2019 as depicted in my appointment letter. The condi...
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...r is so small to take care of my house. Furthemore, I would be thankful that i ...
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... Furthemore, I would be thankful that i have received the letter from your fir...
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... received the letter from your firm as I would definitely never miss an opportuni...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ever miss an opportunity to work in your organization. In addition, the interview...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... you have in the company. However, i would prefer to provide few suggestions...
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...rstly, you might provide me another date in the coming month of September or even...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93564356436 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96683378959 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7619942255 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133959972338 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633946712194 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529207111584 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654061816732 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543383127379 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.