You have recently visited a theater and had an accident there. The staff were very helpful. Write a letter to the manager and say
– Describe the accident.
– How did the staff help you?
– How can similar situations be prevented in the future?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you regarding the serious issue that I faced during my visit to your drama hall.
The main problem was that I got fallen down while moving down stairs for the entry side and there was minor bleeding from my forehead. Even, after the incident, masses were walking onto me and moving ahead to their allotted seat, without bothering about my miserable condition.
However, I was fortunate that one of your staff came to me and assisted to reach at my seat. He immediately called to his colleague and asked him to bring a first aid kit in order to stop the flow of the blood from my forehead. Moreover he latter supported me to reach my car during my departure.
Finally, I would prefer to suggest you that, firstly, there should be sufficient light everywhere to identify the steps so that no one remains in confusion like me. Secondly, a separate employee at every stair area to be made available to direct humans to avoid any accident. Finally, a first aid box should be made available within the reach of the viewers.
I am looking forward to implement my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
Praveen Sonalki
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-26 | chetan Patthar | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ue that I faced during my visit to your drama hall. The main problem was th...
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... However, I was fortunate that one of your staff came to me and assisted to re...
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...rst aid kit in order to stop the flow of the blood from my forehead. Moreover he ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...he flow of the blood from my forehead. Moreover he latter supported me to reach my car ...
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...re should be sufficient light everywhere to identify the steps so that no one re...
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...verywhere to identify the steps so that no one remains in confusion like me. Sec...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to implementing'.
Suggestion: to implementing
... the viewers. I am looking forward to implement my suggestions. Yours faithfully...
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...ng forward to implement my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Praveen Sonalki ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88669950739 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53178968114 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.01363404 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 4.34317383033 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779705242357 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274971581812 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325565617685 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442282375791 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432721781351 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.