You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an english speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear sue,
I hope you’re doing fine these days. I have some news for you. can you guess? Finally, I can have my own living place.
As you know, when I graduated from university, I had some financial difficulties, and my salary wasn’t enough to rent an apartment for my self. so, I lived with one of my friend’s grandmother for two years. but three months ago I can get a good position in one of the famous local companies. my wage is not comparable to the previous one. so, not only can I pay all of my debts, but also I can rent a house by my self.
Let me tell you about my new house. I rent a two-story house which is located in a small village around the city. it suits all my desires and interests. As you know, I’m interested in gardening, and my new house has a cozy garden at the front, where I have planted my favorite flowers and trees like willow, elm, and tulip. also, this has a full-screen window all around the living room with the view of virgin forest and mountains.
I don’t like to tell you more because you have to come by and hear that in person. I’d love it if you could come to my city for Christmas. Although my house has only one room, it is spacious enough for both of us. I hope to see you at that time.
Say hello to your family.
All the best,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31075697211 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45352994874 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5173457726 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.1 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.55 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165957193212 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615982145616 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609846010955 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114535043398 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495348297404 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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