Children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no disputing the fact that adults are playing an imperative and an inseparable factor in their kids’ life. In terms of learning how to speak, behave and develop a personality, children always try to observe their parents and copy their actions. It is a commonly held belief that offspring learn best from adults. However, some still oppose the view that other outside aspects have undeniable impacts on the process of children upbringing and broadening their horizons. Both viewpoints will be analyzed before a reasonable conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, children always analyze ...
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I know my mistakes. thanks
I know my mistakes. thanks for making me aware of them
offspring acquire the language which parents communicate with each other.
offspring acquires the languages by which parents communicate with each other.
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The essay is not exactly right on the topic. The topic is about 'by observing behavior of adults and copying it.', not 'by observing behavior of parents and copying it.'
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