People believe that they should be able to keep all the money that they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

People believe that they should be able to keep all the money that they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People sometimes argue that they should save all of their salary which is provided by employer, and they do not have responsibility to pay tax for government while there are some typical explanations why this is the case. However, I personally believe that paying tax will provide benefits for the citizen.

People who do not willing to pay tax have some obvious reasons such as no advantages, corruption, and uncontrollable. People who have paid tax sometimes cannot fell the merit from their expense, therefore they do not want to settle tax for the second time. Next, citizen do not believe the institution that collect tax because of corruption. For instance, in Indonesia, there is Gayus Tambunan who corrupts the money that is paid by residents. In this situation, the credibility of the organization will fall down and no one willing to clear tax. Finally, people cannot control their money that use for tax, and the government does not build facilities which public need.

On the other hand, government fundraise the capital from society because of some reasons, namely build infrastructure, cover country necessary, and enhance economic circumstance. Firstly, government will erect infrastructure and use money which is paid by citizen. Then the facilities will be useful for the public. Secondly, parliament has some necessities that should be cover and the resident can help the nation if they settle the tax. Finally, when the property, and all needs are covered, the country can increase their economic condition: gross domestic product, national growth, and public wealthy for examples.

In the nutshell, I definitely believe that people have responsibility to pay tax, and the executive cannot survive without society support. However citizen should control cabinet decision and activities to reduce the drawback such as corruption. Therefor, both of government and resident should encourage each other.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2018-08-25 maxy4848 78 view
2017-05-30 lemia13 78 view
2015-05-12 wirasudewa 50 view
2015-03-11 wolve 55 view
2014-05-25 Najibullah 70 view

Comments

People who do not willing to pay tax
People who are not willing to pay tax

People who have paid tax sometimes cannot fell the merit
People who have paid tax sometimes cannot feel the merits

citizen do not believe
citizens do not believe

and no one willing to clear tax.
and no one is willing to clear tax.

build facilities which public need.
build facilities which public needs.

to reduce the drawback
to reduce the drawbacks

Sentence: On the other hand, government fundraise the capital from society because of some reasons, namely build infrastructure, cover country necessary, and enhance economic circumstance.
Error: fundraise Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 152 200

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1572 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.205 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.717 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.026 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5