Prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country’s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures.
Health Prevention is a method of not acquiring a disease. The government of every country should allocate a huge amount of fund for health prevention and education. If the large percentage of budget will be allotted for health and education, the morbidity rate will be decrease and many people will be send to the universities especially those people who are not afford to pay their tuition fees. Thus, health and education are most important things that people should have in life, because without of this our activity daily living is affected and we will be able to get a better job if we are a degree holder. In my opinion, I agree that a large portion of budget will spend on health and education rather than to treatment.
First of all, establishing a health program in the community like free yearly vaccination, feeding program, health monitoring, engage people to sports, encourage joining daily exercise, conducting a seminar in a community regarding on health awareness and health teaching of proper hand washing these are the method of preventing a disease. If the health prevention program is implemented, the large amount of budget for treatment will not be longer needed because at first we help people to promote their health.
In conclusion, spending a big amount of fund for health prevention it helps to lower down of people of
having a diseases so that the treatment will not need a part of big money to spend for hospitalization
and medications because from the beginning we set a preventive measures to control of having a
different diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00757575758 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82317698397 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4530326117 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.25 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352064116194 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186942354914 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617305896718 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174396875695 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955177048865 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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