Five types of the most popular pastime activities among American women and men of the 21-40 age group are presented in the two pie charts. On the whole, male and female in the US spend almost the same number of hours per week for leisure (around 33 hours), while the types of activities preferred vary.
Looking first at leisure time activities chosen my men, they spend almost half of their free time, in particular, 16,2 hours, watching TV or surfing the Internet. The least favorite pastime among American men is sports and walking, which constitutes only 1,1 hours per week.
Moving on to females, more than one-third of their free time (10, 6 hours per week) is spent at home. Women rarely chose to devote their time for walking or sports, spending only 1, 9 hours for that weekly.
Women spend almost twice less time on TV or online than men whereas males stay at home 2 hours less than females each week. Both genders do not like to spend their leisure time on physical activities, spending up to 2 hours on that.
- The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.Write a report for a university tutor describing the process 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- The volcanic island growth cycle 68
- We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions In what ways however can new technologies help maintain our traditions 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, third, whereas, while, in particular, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60655737705 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18969596781 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5464965547 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.375 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26692484426 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115466012838 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775675512231 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162581957917 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072774215302 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.