A comparison of the number of visitors to the Ashdown Museum and the level of satisfaction during the year before and after it was refurbished are presented in both figures.
Overall, visitors increased after the building was renovated, while the standard of satisfaction showed a dramatic rise and every level of the results upward at lest a half than before.
74 thousand people ware visited the Ashdown museum before the building was improved, while 40% of people felt dissatisfied with the facilities of the museum. Also, a slightly bellow the former satisfaction was the ones of them were felt satisfied with 30% of visitors. However, the other three types of satisfaction only earned less than a fifth.
In contrast, after the refurbished of the museum, the statistic of visitors have reached a new peak of 92 thousand, while the majority of them were satisfied with 40%. Following that, more than a third of people were very satisfied, but the percentage of people who were dissatisfied showed a sharply fell by 35 points, and the ones of those were no response to the survey not leveled off.
- The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below. 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 73
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. 61
- The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('bellow') instead of another adjective.
...ith the facilities of the museum. Also, a slightly bellow the former satisfaction was the ones of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9623655914 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73670701166 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4545169992 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304760742233 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134377343447 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911142679111 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192103659556 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779800055941 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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