The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The given illustration describes the various stages involved in the production of tomato ketchup, beginning with harvesting tomatoes and ending with tasting the ketchup with hamburger and fries.

Initially, the procedure starts with picking tomatoes when they are ripe and putting them in the basket. After that, the planters sort the good and bad tomatoes before sending them to the factory where they are removed stalk, seeds and skin. The flesh of tomatoes then is crushed in a container and subsequently added a mixed spice including sugar, vinegar and salt. After respectively boiling and leaving two hours to cool, the ketchup is poured into the bottles. There is quality control after these tomato ketchup bottles are labeled. The next stage is packing and distributing the product to supermarkets, markets or grocery stores. At the end of this process, tomato ketchup is bought to use with hamburger and fries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this tomato' or 'these tomatoes'?
Suggestion: this tomato; these tomatoes
...bottles. There is quality control after these tomato ketchup bottles are labeled. The next s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26351351351 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55998168136 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7657308048 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135852302268 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598986879118 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382514606998 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115025965646 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000553796969591 0.0819641961636 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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