Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.
It remains to be in question whether the aged live with their extended family or separately. Although some people argue that living together heartens grandparents, others claim every individual should be independent. This essay will look at some strong viewpoints made by two opposing sides.
It seems that all possible explanations for grandparents living with children are summarized in one word: support; because old people are less able to manage their daily lives. Proponents mostly emphasize that being surrounded or getting involved with grandchildren`s enthusiastically youthful lives would be a constant source of happiness for grandparents, leading to lower levels of depression. It is also true that in case of incidents, like rubbery or heart attack, the elderly will be provided with attention and care to a greater extent. So, rarely will they experience anxiety over future. As a last point, reduction in costs of housing is a matter which cannot be ignored.
By contrast, those believing the idea of grandparents living independently often state that every age group has its own needs, resulting in different lifestyles. For instance, the old usually avoid being in a noisy place continuously as tolerance decreases by age. Therefore, being visited by their children on a frequent basis causes a more cheerful sense for them. Besides, today`s rapidly changing world have made people busier and houses smaller, so it may be reasonable to shift responsibility for affording old people safety and health from family members to government. Also, living independently appears essential to prevent the aged from social isolation.
To conclude, I consider living separately will be more favorable to all concerned, since peace, privacy and self-esteem are of necessity of a life, and additionally, the young force of society should focus on serving the country more than perpetual treatment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50675675676 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09267614321 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672297297297 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8692140946 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290153643132 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893435029194 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668980225974 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171159973411 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680094347509 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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