Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.
The is a common belief that grandparents should live together with their family members, others, however, consider that these senior citizens should be living independently. This essay will address both side of views and provide an opinion in conclusion.
The proponent of the idea believe the elderly, such as grantparents should be living in a house with their family members as they have a limitation to take care themselve. Thus, their family members can assist them in daily basis. My elderly neighbour, for instance, live live with their relatives because they are basically unable to do anything as they have reach an age when they are unable to perform physically demanding activities such as taking care their home. By living with their family members, they have a comfortable lives as all of the necessity needed are provided by their relatives.
The opponent of this idea, on the other hand, saying that these old age individual ought to be encouraged to live independently as they need calmness and no distraction in their lives. Living with their relatives may disturb them because there is likely children in the house who create noise when they are crying or playing. As a result, this may cause disturbances for the elderly such as unable to have deep sleep, resultly decreasing their well-being status. Thus, it is believed that those senior citizens should be living independently.
To sum up, people have different views about whether the elderly should live independently or not. I personally consider that these old age individuals should be living with their relatives becase majority of the elderly have a limitation to be well-functioned. Thus, by living with their family members, they are well-taken care off and all of their needs are fulfilled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: live
...is. My elderly neighbour, for instance, live live with their relatives because they are b...
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Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...family members, they have a comfortable lives as all of the necessity needed are prov...
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Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...mbers, they have a comfortable lives as all of the necessity needed are provided by their ...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are likely children'?
Suggestion: there are likely children
...heir relatives may disturb them because there is likely children in the house who create noise when they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13103448276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76236814429 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496551724138 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4050953355 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373708460386 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156231206897 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734235628437 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271983838429 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488702236026 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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