Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics:

Question:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Aska on Wed, 10/16/2019 - 08:52

Without any shadow of doubt, it is of significant importance to do any things with a plan. Nowadays, some people are inclines the idea that by dealing with things without any preparation, they will attain the surprise and happiness. I really subscribe the opposite idea that it is essential to make plans and organize in advance, because of its unreplaceable effects to success, pre-request to cooperation. To support my stance, in the course of the essay, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.

First of all, having a plan before doing anything will increases the probability to success and minimize the errors. Because of the rapidly changeable world, the exterior environment sometimes will not be what we intend to. This will lead to unexpected problems when we actually conduct plans. However, by making plans in advance, we will consider solutions to possible problems we will meet. By preparing in advance, we may try to avoid the problems taking place or figure out some solutions to the problem. Therefore, when we face to the problems, we will be less nervous, because of the preparations ahead of time. What's more, pre-consideration of errors that we may make will alert us. We will pay more attention when we doing something with a plan. By eliminating the errors and preparing the solutions to the problem, the success will be made for certain.

In addition, making plans ahead of time helps colleagues cooperate each other better. It is axiomatic that the separating of a single huge project to minor ones which assigned to individuals adds the complexity of the cooperation. Therefore, it is necessary to make a plan before carry out the project. By referring the plan, the task of each person can be decided. And it is easier for managers to know the completed percentage of the project, which contributes to the efficiency and success.

In a nutshell, there is countless advantages for young people to cultivate the ability to plan and organize. Not only when they dealing with their own thing, but also when they cooperate with others, the advanced plan guarantees a greater possibility to success.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-07-11 YasamanEsml 81 view
Essay Categories
Independent TOEFL Writing
Essays by user Aska :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...aving a plan before doing anything will increases the probability to success and minimize...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n we actually conduct plans. However, by making plans in advance, we will conside...
^^
Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ause of the preparations ahead of time. Whats more, pre-consideration of errors that ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are countless advantages'?
Suggestion: there are countless advantages
...ciency and success. In a nutshell, there is countless advantages for young people to cultivate the abili...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05382436261 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88690933699 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5045488411 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145021056755 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497899017106 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048316970431 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997708028754 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421712279121 0.0645574589148 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.