The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of thiree types of nutmnts, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisoins where relevant
The diagrams reveal the percentages of three kinds of nutrients including sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in representative meals expended in the USA. None of them would be healthy if eaten too much.
People eat a large amount of sodium and saturated fat in dinner, at about 43% and 37%. And the Americans gain the most of added sugar from snacks (42%), which also bring quiet a few saturated fat at 21% .
Breakfast bring the lowest percentage of each of them at an average data about 15%. Lunch come in second on sodium and saturated fat at about one third of them. Except another two kinds of nutrients, dinner still ranked 23% of added sugar for the second. And snacks merely have a little sodium at 14% , same as breakfast .
Above all, snaked contained too much added suger and dinner included a lot sodium which may not be healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71333333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35459273918 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7993288515 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105732408522 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513971479057 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642730108101 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08551194835 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660183615412 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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