some people it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
It is reasoned by some that one should adjust with severe situations like poor earning or less job satisfaction. While, others claim that these type of problems could be overcome. I completely agree with the later’s argument and in this essay, I will be discussing both views and provide my personal opinion.
People with the former reasoning mainly claim that however worse the situation is we need to cope up with it. They also consider that fighting out a problem is not an option since, it can lead to more troubles. There are many people working in unsuitable environment, without any sort of interest and the struggle is real. We see many labours doing a lot of hard work, day in and day out. They work to feed their family and run their livelihood, therefore they can not hesitate in working. Also, human demands is an ever-growing phenomena, so many people argue rather than increasing the work efforts we must be appeased with whatever we have. This are the main reasons given for coping with situation.
On the other hand, opponents firmly believe that job satisfaction is a must for an individual’s growth. If people work in areas of their liking they are more likely to succeed. Similarly, through diligence and consistent efforts, toughest of the situation could be dealt with. For example, Dr. A.P.J. Kalam. a renowned scientist from India, came from a humble background and reached the height of success only because of his commitment towards work without backing up in adverse conditions.
To conclude, In my opinion, through diligence and consistent hard work most of the situations can be improved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... poor earning or less job satisfaction. While, others claim that these type of proble...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...be discussing both views and provide my personal opinion. People with the former reasoning mai...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...must be appeased with whatever we have. This are the main reasons given for coping w...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a must for an individual's growth. If people work in areas of their liking th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...lt with. For example, Dr. A.P.J. Kalam. a renowned scientist from India, came fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99267399267 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73712908825 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1921952913 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816741854028 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275435011174 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297350162671 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436507532767 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255357805251 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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