With the advent of developing technology and resources, the idea of which generation enjoys life more is something which surely crosses upon each individuals' mind . We often hear our grandparents speaking about the various activities they did as youngsters and are completely different from what we observe today. In my opinion, younger people enjoy life more comparatively and I feel this way for two reasons. The coming paragraphs will express my opinion on the same.
Firstly, as generations pass by, it is very certain that there is tremendous development in technology which could have not been availed by the older generations during their youth. This progressive development can definitely contribute in many aspects to enjoyment. To state an instance, with such easier availability of transportation that is available now, for today's younger generation travelling to various cities is just a piece of cake. However, travelling is a concept which is an once in a blue moon activity for the older people since transportation was not in such a well-developed state back in those days. In such a case, the older generation has never experienced such frequent and easier travelling to be an enjoyment. Such cases of development can provide us with plethora of options which are being utilized by the young adults as means of enjoyment.
Even if older people are much experienced, I believe that the younger generation enjoys life more by experimenting and trying out new things in spite of any affiliated consequences to it. Failure or loss is something that older generations are not very comfortable with. However, the youth embrace these kind of risky experiences even if it may not turn out as expected. For example, let us consider paragliding. Now, this activity is surely something that older people find risky and unwilling to do since it can have severe consequences or might even lead to death. In contrast, the younger generation still enjoys pursuing such activity since it is an experience which they might enjoy in spite of any risk it may possess. Such nonchalant and fearless behavior observed in the growing children certainly helps them enjoy life in a much different way.
There exists both pros and cons associated with the generations and an idea of enjoyment depends on each individual person and not a generation as a whole. Nevertheless, in my opinion, younger people comparatively enjoy life more due to the various opportunities and resources made available to them.
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do. 73
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 90
- A true university education encompasses far more than the narrow, specialized study of a single discipline. Only through exploring the broad spectrum of liberal arts courses can students become truly learned. 66
- TOEFL integrated writing: Altruism. 3
- Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...urely crosses upon each individuals mind . We often hear our grandparents speaking...
^^
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...wever, travelling is a concept which is an once in a blue moon activity for the ol...
^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...rtable with. However, the youth embrace these kind of risky experiences even if it may not...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, i feel, in contrast, kind of, speaking about, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16748768473 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00801931314 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514778325123 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9417879138 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.421052632 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261542457638 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806950241949 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894969848161 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173488421157 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596978639345 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.