"A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor."
Every country, though different in various aspects have one thing in common which is their system of providing justice. All the countries have their rules and norms for the various crimes happening in society. One such type of punishment is mentioned in the issue which includes depriving the individual of any civil rights or the right to benefit if he/she commits a crime intentionally. Though I agree with this point, there can be better ways to come up with a solution. The coming paragraphs suggest how changes can be brought into this measure for achieving a better judicious society.
It is of at most importance to punish an individual who commits any malfeasance intentionally. Although one can be a little venial if an unintentional mistake was made, severe punishment for violating the social contract intentionally is cardinal. This establishes a just society and if stringent measures of punishment are not followed, there will be a tremendous rise in the unruly behavior of the citizens and it will be no time that the crime rates reach an apotheosis.
As punishment for a crime is necessary, it is of equal importance to ensure that the person must realize his wrong-doing. He must realize his mistake and must ensure he doesn't repeat them again. Else, punishment alone will make them vindictive and will be a frivolous and futile effort to correct the person. Hence, proper rehabilitation methods must be present along with the punishment which must ensure that the individual will henceforth not create any hindrance to the society and will not violate the social contracts.
However, deprivation of civil rights or benefitting from his labor might not only affect the individual himself but rather all the other dependencies associated with him. For example, if a builder commits any treason, depriving him of the benefit of his organization will not only affect him rather might affect his entire family who is dependent on the individual. This might be an unjust practice and can punish the individuals who aren't at fault. Also, civic rights are very necessary for an individual to justify himself and depriving them of their rights will be a partial justice system that is being implemented.
Hence, proper scope of correction along with punishment must be provided to the individual to the extent of certainty that he is innocuous to the society henceforth. However, achieving the same by deprivation of their rights seems to be unjust and all the necessary reasons must be considered before indicting an individual of a crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Suggestion: aren't
...tice and can punish the individuals who arent at fault. Also, civic rights are very n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08095238095 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86871070932 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478571428571 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1822744041 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167086349957 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612184627909 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641093123879 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955046286087 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463995902154 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3 Out of 6
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