Which kind of students should get an opportunity to educate in a college or university is a controversial topic. Some people think that every student should have those opportunities, while others believe that only student who has good behaviors can receive opportunities. In my opinion, I tend to believe that all students should study at university for two reasons: reducing the unemployment rate and improvement of society.
First of all, education can reduce the unemployment rate in society. Unemployment is one of the major problems that every country needs to solve. If students gain more knowledge from the university, this problem can be relieved due to having a job. It is not only reducing the unemployment rate but also solving crimes in the country because the main reason of criminal situations is lacking money. In other words, the crime rate is solved by education as well. For example, when working at a company, we will get a salary at the end of the month. Therefore, there is no reason to rob or kill other people for money. This is why education can relieve the problems of unemployment and crime.
The society will be improved in a better way. Students who graduate from the university have the knowledge to develop their countries because each student has different experiences and abilities to do different things, so they can use their knowledge in many careers, such as engineering, politics, finances, and so on. New graduate students, in addition, may have new information to share with senior employees who cannot follow the trend in society to make new ideas for improving the production of the business. Also, these new employees can replace a position that may be empty because of retired people.
At the end of the day, it is an interesting idea to accept only a good student at the college. However, giving an opportunity to all students has more benefits, which are employment's increase and improvement, to society. Thus, if students can access to education, they can make a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99705014749 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86907089014 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1178591299 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17718241885 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574994157925 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488989540473 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107939371957 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725463344419 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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